As Jack came out of his train of thought, a peach-colored hand was coming in his direction. Though he couldn't speak, Jack instinctively tried to yell to get his mom's attention. Of course, that didn't do anything. "Mom! Mom! I'm a piece of chocolate, don't grab me!" he thought. Fortunately, the chocolate Carey grabbed wasn't Jack. She slid it into her mouth and began chewing. Jack only watched in fear, thinking that could be him at any time. "Oh my gosh," Carey cooed as she swallowed the chocolate, "that is absolutely delicious, Jack is so thoughtful". The girls giggled. "He sure is. I'm so happy we have him as a brother," Lucy spoke up. Carey smiled, and reached for another piece of chocolate. Jack wanted to move around and dodge her hand, possibly getting her attention in the process, but he couldn't move. Like before, Carey had missed Jack and chosen a different piece. Jack watched again as his mom opened her mouth and placed the chocolate on her tongue. She slowly chewed this piece, making sure to savor every bit of it. In his mind, Jack shivered.
Jack's luck soon ran out, however, as the same hand that came into the box twice before was heading straight for Jack in particular. All he could do was watch in horror as his mom's large, white fingers closed around him and slowly raised him out of the box. Izzy and Lucy kept a close watch this time, knowing that this piece was Jack by the identifiable unique shape of the candy. They grinned at each other and quietly chuckled. This, in their mind, was one of the best pranks they had ever accomplished. Jack stared on as the slightly brown-stained voluptuous lips of Carey became an especially noticeable feature in front of him. He paused in the air, though, close to her lips. Carey had stopped raising the chocolate to her mouth to speak. "I wonder where Jack could have gotten these, did he tell either of you?" she asked her daughters. They both quickly shook her heads, the anticipation of what was going to happen increasing substantially. Carey shrugged her shoulders. "Huh. I'll have to ask him when we see him again". She then resumed widening her mouth, Jack becoming increasingly terrified as he got closer to the maw of his mother. Her breath, the scent a combination of the coffee she had at lunch and the chocolates she had been eating, washed over Jack as he was brought under he top lip and past her front teeth. Carey set Jack on her tongue, and the nightmare began.
*SQUISH*
*CRUNCH*
*CHEW*
In his mind, Jack was screaming. His mom was mashing him up and tossing him about to either side of her mouth, obliterating his small and round figure into paste. He was lucky enough not to feel any physical pain, but the mental challenges of watching the light from the outside come in then disappear as his mom opened as closed her mouth as she chewed were very difficult. Something about this particular piece of candy was especially tasty to Carey, so she spent a little extra time sucking on the remnants of the chocolate, then chewing them up a little more and sucking on those bits. Jack, at this point, was unbelievably exhausted, having been dominated by his own mother, her teeth, and her excessive and forceful savoring. Now soaked in her saliva and ready to be swallowed, Jack was made into a pile of mush at the center of Carey's tongue and slowly moved backwards. Light dimmed as Carey closed her mouth, but a very slight bit at the back of her throat allowed Jack to see his next destination. In a moment's notice, he was tossed back and fell down a long shaft.
*GULP*
Izzy and Lucy almost squealed in delight as they saw a little bump descend down their mom's throat. They had done it. Their big brother was now just another treat inside the stomach of their delighted mother. They knew he would be okay, and knowing he had a lot to go through now, were ready to head back to the hotel, smiles plastered on their faces.
"Oh, that was so good. But, I best save the rest of these for later, can't go on wasting all of them in one sitting. You girls ready to go?" Carey asked, letting out a quiet burp afterwards. The girls nodded their heads, and off the three went to the car, and back to the hotel.
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