Hello bertiebrite hoping for peace ,

This is a Contest Review from the "TGDI Group" .

Thoughts and Feelings

LOL!!!! This was great. I loved this story. It was so funny. I could totally picture all of this. I found this to be creative.



The plot from what I understand is that a guy is about to go fight and plunder some trolls but even though he is a warrior and killer, his wife is the one who wears the pants in the house. lol

Characters

My favorite was definitely the wife character. I loved how she babied the wolves. These fierce looking things were her darlings and I could totally believe it.

You also did a great job writing Wilgar's character. I loved that he isn't brave enough to mutter the things he is thinking to his wife.

Awesome Moments

As I mentioned before I could totally picture all of this. Especially the part you write when you use the photo. Knowing that the look on his face in the photo is because he was walking the wolves to go poop and the men were laughing at him. Priceless!!!

The characters are also really well written.

I also like the scene in which he is getting dressed. It just seemed so hilarious to me.

Things to Improve

I have nothing to say in this part.

Overall

I enjoyed your story a lot and I wish you luck in the contest. I think I have said enough praise above that needs no repeating.

There is one thing. Please turn this into a series or something. Would love to read more about Wilgar and his wife.



Thank you for the read.


This review is just my view of your work. I am not a professional and only bring to the table what your work meant to me. I do not mean to offend. You may disregard what ever you disapprove because this work is your voice.

jocelyva
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