Hey Jill,

This is one of those pieces I read ages ago and thought that I had reviewed but just now realized I hadn't. Good intentions and all that...

Anyway, I loved this when I first read it and I still love it now. This is in my opinion a phenomenal bit of writing. It has just enough of everything to be believable and not over the top.

One of the most difficult things about writing supernatural creatures is to make them seem real without making them cliche or ridiculous. You pull it off flawlessly.

I love that you can write sexy without writing smutty. Although, I know you can do that too hehe. Meridiana exudes sex appeal but is still incredibly classy and I think that is her true allure. In essence making her the perfect predator. It is easy to why this is so difficult to write now. Well done.

The quality of the writing on this piece is super tight. I didn't notice any errors or even anything that requires tweaking. I honestly think this piece is a perfect 5 star piece of literature. My hat's off too you. Bravo.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .



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