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 This review is given on behalf of "Invalid Item" I like what you wrote very much because it touched my heart and mind and then made a huge impact upon uplifting my spirit. As the Lord reels us in We can feel Him from within Tugging at our guts Healing as he cuts.__This part of the poem has a very nice flow. I like the smoothness and rhythm of your words  Exhausting rebellion begins As peace and quiet set in Realizing we are chosen To lead a path ill trodden.__I very much like what you said here, thank you The last line for me seems slightly unable to fit well. For me it is like a small rock dropped. Unfortunately I can't think of a way to word this differently; which may be why you used these words. And, I don't know how to tell you why this last sentence seams like a small rock dropped.Would we be the person God calls us for a reason To opt to fill His shoes And witness His Good News.__ I love the good news Person and reason; I know why you used them. The two words for me, seam to cause the two lines to be a bit bumpy. It could be me and my reading. Thank you for writing, sharing your writing, and allowing me to review what you wrote This review is given on behalf of "Invalid Item"  WDC POWER REVIEWERS GROUP  dogpack sig Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! ** Image ID #1615935 Unavailable **  The WDC Army Angels My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"
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You responded to this review 10/31/2011 @ 2:22pm EDT