Review of showering acts of joy member to member

Why I chose this piece: Anniversary

Overall impression of piece This is very interesting. It is like reading a storm when y ou don't know what the next part will be. Life with God can be like that. How many reformers were burned as heretics? I can tell you as a history buff, the number is large.

Grammatical and spelling errors: I think Holy Spirit should have capitals.

What I liked? I like the reference to new life. New life is now and it isn't just heaven by and by. It is tangible and real. There is a call on our lives. This is as real as I have seen it written

What I disliked Stalin and Nietzsche did not have anything to do with Jews, at least in terms of the halocost. I think the hatred across Europe was pretty universal. That is why Hitler got away with it, for a time. I am not sure if a lot would get the reference. Lonely in a figure of speech isn't a strong enough image. He had the Father through out life. I think he was lonely sometimes dealing with is hockey-puck intelligence disciples.

How the piece made me feel. I really had to get into this. How do you analyze a storm? You have a lot of basic truth. In the end, that is all we can hope for.

Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting

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