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 A Portal Through Time Open in new Window. [E]
An average girl finds a time portal. One step through and she's tangled in a feudal era!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Open in new Window.!need apostrophe between g and s: "One things for sure:
need to have matching tenses of verbs: walking, expecting; I'm just walking home from my bus stop. I expected the rest of the day/
this has no meaning here: "Because SCIENCE.

Cute story. Clever ending. Caps not needed, just exclamation point is adequate.

Welcome to WDC. You'll find friends here and will learn a lot while having fun. ANN
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