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*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Open in new Window.! this line needs to be of appropriate tense to the story, present tense "I'm not allowed...": "I usually wasn't allowed much and coveted what little I had.

I presume this is the beginning of a book... It's will make a good long story fitting the description of the item. I see it is gay/lesbian story so am very interested. I'm always glad when another openly out gay writer comes to WDC. Checkk out UNITED, and plan to join us. ANN
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