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 The Teacher Open in new Window. [E]
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Open in new Window.!Jay: best if doublespace between paragraphs so your reader's eyes can rest. Be sure when you post to use something other than "other" so it will show up in various genres when readers are looking for something to review,

a missing word after "I""The office let me know she called and I ready to run for the

I can't believe any 'boss' would be so darn bossy!

This is incomplete, stops in the middle of a sentence. Your readers want more...

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