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| A pleasant hour dbbarnes,   Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon"  !  Congratulations !!! for being one of the Author Spotlight on the "Angel Review Forum" in this month of April. I'm your friend here Samberine Everose   and giving you a review as my gift to you.{size:2.5Please remember that I‘m not a professional writer or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.  MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :This is so sweet, when we inspired we can always create a beautiful poetry and can be dedicated to the one we love.  What I think about the: Title - it just hook me by the given title, while roaming around your piece, the title is the captivating part of a piece in which the reader first to see it.The title enticed me to read your piece. Imagery - Words are easy to reach so it just fluently flow on how the emotion was really intended to deliver. It always reminds me of true love- forever. Rhyme and Rhythm this is a free verse and it blends with the created emotions.   MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :I didn't find any words that can distract the flow. I just have a thought on the second line I see all of you, It just created and I just perceived two meanings on it. Here are my thoughts I see all of you- seeing more than one person. I see all of you- seeing and knowing him already as a whole. I just think if there is something you can add so that it just only concentrate on the thought of the second line. The word sooth I think also the word soothe..? MY FINAL THOUGHT : A nice piece. In your piece, you give and let me to know the truth about your beloved someone. And i see certain on it. True love will always new, even times will be faded and old and always change every day, but true love as long as it was always nurtured and keep, it will always new. Well done. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.0 Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future. Until next time.  
  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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