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Hi D I Harrison

My name is Lyn, I am a member of the House Florent. We are the sly foxes in the Game of Thrones.

Title: A Manic Depressive's Guide. I was curious what someone's life was like.

First Impression: Wow, I never considered all the simple thought processes that I take for granted. I just do. Apparently that is not the case for everyone.

What needs your attention: I think this piece would be stronger if you elaborated more about the life itself versus just listing the thoughts. I am unsure as to why step one is listed twice.

What part I liked best: Step one in the Daily Living evaluating what a person thinks about getting out of bed. Do I have too? Do I want too? Is it a problem if I do? I cannot imagine missing a moment of my day, so this is so hard for me to relate. I feel so sad, that someone experiences this on a daily basis. I chuckled when I saw bloody hell,, I am guilty of saying that when I am frustrated.

Overall impression: I was truly saddened by the reading this. It must be so difficult to face this on a daily basis. I think that the author could develop this further and provide information that all readers could make connections with.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

Please keep in mind I am a writer just like you and I am offering my thoughts. It is your choice to take the suggestions or not. Only you can decide what is best for your work!

What does the Fox say?????


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .