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Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: I found this to be a little dismal, but honest. I can tell this person annoys you to no end. You did a great job with great meaning and great use of the language.

*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: Mood is a little like music going along with its own beat and tune. The tone is good and solid.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: It has an effect on people. It makes you aware of your humming and how it bothers some people, but not all. Poems are suppose to bring out emotion..

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!

*BalloonR*WelcometoWDC "Newbie Welcome WagonOpen in new Window.! *BalloonR*


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