Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie!

Personal Impression: I found this to be a great mood lifter. I can tell your really love your son. I like the way you described the blessings of having a baby. It is so well thought out and a little whimsical. You did a great job with great meaning and great use of the language.

Tone & Mood: Mood is a little whimsical and the tone is good and solid.

Emotional Impact: It has a very soothing effect on me because I have three sons. It made me want to cry. They are all grown now and don't need momma near as much. Poems are suppose to bring out emotion..

Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!