Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie!

Personal Impression: I was a little lost at first, but you set me on the right path pretty quickly. I can only hope this didn't happen to you and that you thought this up for the contest. I hate to think of that I'd ever have to have a prostrate exam and all it entails. Anything could happen in that little frame of words though and you told a good little story. I enjoyed it. I thought it was an alien probe or some psyc ward where they probe people to make them scream for the fun of it.

Tone & Mood: Great tone and mood. It was funny and honest. It revealed a lot in a few words.

Emotional Impact: You caused me to wonder and speculate. That is what we strive for as writers.

Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

Summary: Your overall story was well presented and held my attention. I felt for the guy getting the prostrate exam. I was completely sucked in and thought that you could make a story out of this. I mean a longer story that talks about the humiliation of getting one of those exams.

Overall: I would recommend this to others.

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this! Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!