Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie!

Personal Impression: I was a little lost through out the entire thing.Is she a rooster or a person? I think it was well written, but I was, honestly, lost.

Tone & Mood: Great tone and mood. It had a lazy kind of mood through out it. Like the just waking up and stretching kind of mood. The good ole laid back, blankets up to your neck, post dream state.

Emotional Impact: You caused me to wonder and speculate and to question what I was reading. That is not what we want. To make our readers question what we are reading. We need to make it clear. You did great on the whole story other than the confusing me on what I was reading. I know roosters don't read, but I didn't know what I was reading.

Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

Summary: Your overall story was confusing, but well written. Way to go.

Overall: I would recommend this to others, but I hope you clarify the story a bit more unless you mean it to be confusing. You never know.

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!