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Rhythm & Rhyme Contest Entry - Jun 2010 - Cinquain Form
by Jeff is Gru in #2343485 Author Icon
Review by jaya h Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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A nice short poem. The image prompt is not properly justified , I think. The background should have been described as well.Of course it nay not be possible to fit into the form , probably a condition for the contest entry. It sometimes hard to write within rules and boundaries.
A good read,
Jaya H.


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