Hello,
This is the perfect type of refreshment required when I'm a little tired of studies. Though the story is mostly dominated by dialogues, this is pretty enjoyable to read and it will teach kids a good lesson. I particularly enjoyed the part where rabbit realized her mistakes. You can try to put in a bit of descriptions to show what's happening rather than just telling plainly. Keep writing!

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