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** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** *BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Open in new Window.! sad yet written very well. The writer gives the details of a husband finding his wife on the patio, dead from the cancer; then he follows the plan he had carefully made until he too was there, in he chair beside her yet gone to the Other Side to be with her.

Your story brings to mind the questions about the Other Side of this life; so many questions of if or how it will be.

You'll get more reviews if you leave spaces between paragraphs that allow your reader's eyes to rest. The white space invites readers to stay and learn your powerful love story.

I saw no errors; just a good story with a plot in which all sentences lead to the end quite well.

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