Hello burrowsarah245,

I found your article "Invalid Item"  on the "review a newbie" link and found it to be very informative.

I don't pretend to be an English major or an expert in grammar. You don't have to agree with anything I am saying, I'm simply offering my humble opinion concerning your work. I hope you find this feedback useful

Overall Impression:
I thought your article was well written, and your information was presented in a format making it easy to read and digest. I try to review a story /article every day. As I read your article, I was immediately hooked by the substance of your content. I'm sure I learned more from reading your article than you will ever get from my review. I liked that you provided a link for further research, and gave some tips from that link in BOLD type. This grabbed my attention and screamed "look at me, I am important". I hope that you learned this information from your research or occupation, and not from an ID theft experience. Once again, a very informative and well written piece!!

Grammar and Mechanics:
Very well written, I saw no problems with your writing mechanics or grammar

Suggestions:
The only suggestion I have is to keep putting pen to paper (or fingers to keyboard) You are very talented and I look forward to reading/reviewing more of your work.

I also see you are new to WDC and want to welcome you

Thank you for sharing your story.

I welcome you to visit my portfolio and offer a review on any piece that may interest you

Rozebud

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