First Thoughts: I discovered "Invalid Item" on "The Shameless "Plug" Page" . The first paragraph hooked me with I press my body hard against the vinyl siding behind me. The speaker moves the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense. What I liked: I like the smooth flow of the plot. Suggestions For Improvement: I found no technical problems or typos. Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this chilling story. Write on.
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