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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() It is a free style with consistent rhyme scheme so it may not be vital. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Now, it does look a bit like free verse with longer and shorter lines in verses..{like verse 3 has abrupt end lines like a storm begins and ends) so maybe it is for effect. Take what feels right and ignore the rest. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() In verse 3, I wondered about the comma after "by" as the line and the next are both complete sentences. ![]() ![]() ![]() Light on the path as you write on! |