Hi Linda, I am reviewing your story "Tools of the Trade" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on DC. ♥ This short story is about a psychiatrist named Dr. Zanner and his mentally ill patient Bill. One day Dr. Zanner breaks doctor patient confidentiality by discussing and then "making fun" of Bill and because of this Bill becomes angry and decides that he needs closure. Bills closure involves a day pass, Dr. Zanner, a hammer, screwdriver and connecting the dots. ♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: This short seemed to be well written, I do not have any suggestions to offer you at this time. ♥ Spelling/Grammar: I spotted no common grammar or spelling errors contained within the short. ♥ Overall: This short was intriguing until the end. I was not expecting that ending so well done on that! I loved the Doctor patient aspect of this. I really enjoyed reading this short and I look forward to reading more from this author. This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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