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Hi jree03! I'm here in your port to review your piece, "Seasons" in celebration of your account anniversary month! *GiftV* *Bigsmile* Congratulations on two years! *Ribbon*

*StarB* What a lovely poem about the seasons! My favorite season is fall because of the crisp air and cold nights and bursts of color in the trees! I could really feel your love of nature through this poem. And I also really liked all the emoticons you used! Very cute!

*StarG* I did notice a few edits you could make. Your words are in red below and my suggestions follow after:

the pretty leafs falling "leafs" should be spelled leaves

new ways of learnig missing the "n" in learning *Smile*

*StarB* I think you could also enhance this poem with a larger font size and font colors as well! The poem is all about the beauty of nature through the seasons, I think it would benefit from a jazzed up appearance to match the lovely emoticons!

*StarG* Thank you for sharing your writing and congratulations again on your two year account anniversary!

Take care,
Emily

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