Hello Amethyst Angel,

I am Kristina, and I am here to give you a "Game of Thrones"  review and rate it. I came across your poem, Courage, through another WDC member. I greatly enjoyed reading it, and I hope you find this feedback useful.

Message/Theme: The message shows that true courage is thinking and doing for someone else before yourself. The author describes his/her feelings through people to do for others first.

Narrative/Style: The narrative is a small poem that shows that he/she who gives of him/herself is truly blessed in the end.
The style is emotional and personal.

Form/Flow: The form is a 28 line continuous Free Verse poem.
The flow follows the author's thoughts.

Tone: The tone is appreciative, compassionate, and sentimental.
Mood: The mood is peaceful, refreshing, and warm.

Imagery/Pace: The imagery shows his/her contentment with life - Knowing the investment is worth it
And the good that you do
Will come full circle
Back to you.

The Pace is smooth and filled with thought.

Favorite lines:
Courage is loving like you're not afraid
Giving when you'd rather keep
Taking that leap
Knowing you're in too deep
Going ahead anyway.

Write On!

Kristina

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