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Courage Open in new Window. [E]
From the lofty to the mundane...
by Amethyst Snow Angel Author Icon
Review of Courage  Open in new Window.
Review by Jayngle Bells Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello, Amethyst Snow Angel!

*Checkb*Overall Impression:
The poem is a lovely exploration of the concept of grand gestures and everyday acts, revealing the breadth of courage in its various forms. It thoughtfully captures the essence of bravery in extraordinary and ordinary circumstances, resonating with a broad audience by illustrating that courage is found in heroic acts but also in the routine of daily life.

*Checkb*Form, Rhythm, Cadence, and Style:
Free verse was an excellent choice, as it allow the poem to resonate without the constraints of a rigid structure. The rhythm flows naturally, mimicking the ebbs and flows of daily life and the internal struggles associated with acts of courage.

*Checkb*Content:
The content is rich with relatable scenarios that ground the concept of courage in real-life situations, making it accessible and impactful. From mundane tasks like making one's bed and taking out the trash to more profound acts of selflessness and advocacy, the poem covers a wide spectrum of activities that embody courage. Everyone's situation is different, so who are we to judge?

*Checkb*Grammar and Mechanics:
The poem is well-composed, with clear, concise language that conveys deep emotions and reflections without ambiguity. The mechanics support the clarity and flow of the poem.

*Checkb*Final Thoughts:
It challenges and expands the reader's perception of what it means to be courageous, making a compelling case that true bravery is often found in the quiet, unseen moments of everyday life. This poem reminds us of the quiet strength that resides within each of us, encouraging reflection and appreciation for the small yet significant acts of courage we witness or perform daily.

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

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