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Attacker , Hacker ...... Open in new Window. [E]
meeting someone, who change you life its a faith or destiny ,who knows.
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Firework* Positives

I enjoyed this poem. I particularly liked the structure and the easy flow of the read, as well as the theme of someone you're attracted too hacking your attention and focus. That was really unique and kept the poem engaging throughout.


*Firework* Suggestions

In the second line, I think you're missing an article "I am not an/your/etc. attacker." That was the only small issue that I noticed in an otherwise solid piece.


*Firework* Overall

Overall, this was a fun read and I thought you did a great job with it. Nice work!


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