Hi Wandering Thoughts,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with surprise and joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about an elderly man who dreams of finding the fountain of youth. The reader is hoping that the man will be content with the rest of his life. They will read to the last word to find out. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.