Hi dogwood212,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is light and full of fun. This takes all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about just being ridiculous. We all have those moments when we just want to let our fun side come out. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.