Hi Ebonii,

This is a wonderful story. The tone is full of nervousness and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Sindy is in any danger. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a woman who thinks dangerous creatures lurk in the woods where her and companions have set up camp. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on Sindy, and she comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across a couple of structural issues that need your attention:




1)dto-Should read "to".

2)silowette-Should read "silhouette".

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.