Hi Nadine,

This is a wonderful article. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the article. Anyone in the healthcare industry or having healthcare issues will anxiously begin to read to find out more. You introduce the topic by telling the reader exactly what the article is about. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about the trends in medical treatment and how your medical facility will be meeting the needs of your patients with a emphasis on remote care. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. I did come across a couple of structural issues that need your attention:

1)Healthcare industry in India is changing fast.-Should read "The healthcare industry in India is changing fast."

2)patient can have a-Should read "the patient can have a"

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to your reader. Great job.