Hello Nixie,

I followed your link from Newsfeed. I read "The Angel Flying Academy." I have a few thoughts about it to share with you.

You created a wonderful story derived from the three word prompt given in the flash fiction challenge. Unique and original. After starting to read 72 years ago, it is a challenge to find anything original to me. A story of angels being in school to learn to fly is a fabulous idea brought to fruition in your story.

The memorable words are: "floated, serenity, warm, wish, welcomed, fluttered," and more. The image of the teacher with a wing span of sixteen feet, eight per wing, was a massive hook!

I noticed the first word is one space indented. You may want to eliminate that first space.

I really liked your story a lot. It set my cockeyed day straight. For that, I thank you. This is one of the few I keep in my personal file of great stories. Keep on looking for good things you have written and I will happily read and review them.

Write on!
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