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 Hot Pursuit.   [E]
It happened at the library.
by ~SilverMoon~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi ~SilverMoon~

I saw your request in Newsfeed for feedback on your "Pursuit" story. I am sitting here still smiling imagining the site of people trying to outrun turkeys. The best part is that it happened at the library's parking lot. I wonder if someone drops their book if they read a book. You wrote it as it happened. It seemed like a natural thing to discover turkeys in the parking lot. I laughed even harder when other turkeys showed up. The only thing missed, that would answer my curiosity, is how old your son is? Thanks for bringing attention to this funny real story. You can't make this kind of stuff up!
Write on!
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