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Given: Aug 26, 2024 at 8:41pm
Length: 755 Characters |
716 w/o WritingML
A woman looks out a window on Valentine's day, looking for a bird to give her a sign of what her future beholds, in terms of her love life, not wanting to be a maiden. She ends up seeing a hawk. What this means, she doesn't know. Then, she ends up saving the life of a plasterer from a terrible fate. There's plenty that happens as a result.
Characters
Characters look interesting.
Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, once I understood what I was reading.
Suggestion
Might help to put in a date - not everyone expects Shakespearean script in a story.
Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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