Hi Kare,


This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about working ideas until they are pliable and easier to use in writing. I have struggled with using phrases well in writing. It can be a challenge at times. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.