Caught this one on the fly in the read and review items crossing my screen. It gave me some feels. One thing: Just never open your mouth and prove them right, another apt adage.

I like this and what you have offered. This is solid advice. It helps to have more than that going for you. But, a mentor like this...hard to find. Good on you. But, I know people have other ways of judging a person. It includes some of those other habits, the car you drive, the clothes you wear, where you hang. It's better to be a mystery, I think.

This is loosely written as a poem and that spacing could be reformatted before posting to get it down to single line space. Usually you can find an 'unformat' option under formatting, if you prefer the text tighter. That way it will be easier to read for that flow.

You should use some examples in your poem. A poem can express it's feelings by showing something about that person you describe. What does this person demonstrate that can account for the knowledge offered? People are more about experiencing something rather than being told how it is. You can really grab people just with a few depictions/expressions of your own, of these habits that can earn respect. Again, I feel one could get a foot in the door and people off that back.
Helps to be tall. Did he mention lifts?

It helps not to give a crap. Read up on the habits of narcissists and even sociopaths, but be careful. If you're not one, it's okay to practice some of their habits. Don't respond to their direct questions, especially if you think they're fishing for something. Ignore them, because the narcissists will not acknowledge you, especially went right. That's where silence is golden and can unnerve some people.

A group of people can shun someone, but it doesn't mean it has to affect the person of ire. In fact, the longer it goes on, these people have to look in the mirror and ask themselves why they play children's games instead of...number one, give respect. You don't owe it to anyone, but if you acknowledge them with 'I see you', maybe you'll have an ally, and deserved respect.

Never walk alone? That might mean, have a crew. But, don't be the bottom feeder like I was. Lesson learned there. I'm not other people's chump or punch line. Yeah, lots of good stuff. Thanks for sharing this and the line to grab onto.

Brian
WDC Reviewer


Just raced back to spin through this one more time. You're never a loser. Don't acknowledge defeat. Kobe respected Steph because it was always next play...never got too high and never got down on himself. Yeah, this really makes me think. Thanks again.

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