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Our Anchor in the Storm Open in new Window. [E]
How God provided for my family and I in 2020.
by The Puppet Master Author Icon
Review by Joy Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello, The Puppet Master,

Here is a review for your "Our Anchor in the Storm" Open in new Window., which was offered to me by the Random Reviews.

Comments and Observations:

Such a personal and relatable piece with heartfelt reflections throughout. Despite the challenging events such as a job loss, health, and home repair issues, you show that you have found stability through faith. Exactly, IMHO, finding stability through chaos is what real faith is.

As a personal experience piece, this one has benefited greatly from the addition of small details such as the bathroom mold, staying with parents, and health fears, in addition to the challenges of the pandemic.

So nice that you kept your faith as a central theme and the anchor of your messages. You show the readers how faith helped you with the challenges and offered hope and comfort. Scriptural references, like Psalm 91, strengthen your connection to faith even more.

Then, I especially like the mention of gratitude throughout the piece as it softens the difficulty of the events as well as offering a sense of optimism and resilience.

The tone of the piece is conversational, and if I were to make any suggestion, I'd say, possibly adding how your faith has grown or changed over time, as a reflection, could become an invitation for the readers to think about their own experiences more deeply.

I am delighted to say, overall, this piece is very sincere for it shows gratitude and trust in God during a difficult time, and I enjoyed reading it very much.

Best wishes with your work.

Joy sig for Angels-by Kiya

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