Hi Alex,


This is a fantastic story. The tone is frenzied and sinister. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Charon has a life other that involves something other than sailing across the Styx River. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about Charon, the ferryman who sails the ship across the River Styx bringing souls to their final resting place. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature in very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on Charon, and he comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.