Hello, Lolita!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your "Forever and always, my love" poem today.

Your writing kept my interest straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

I really enjoyed the love, passion, and enthusiasm you infused in this entire romantic love poem of yours.

I suspect that most people who have been in love could relate to this poem of yours.

My favorite line was hard to choose on this poem, but I'm going with this one: "Time slows down to listen to the symphony of our laughter, lost in our happiness." It was beautiful and felt extra significant, although your whole poem was significant and lovely.

If you haven't done so already, you could enter this lovely poem in user purplesunday's "Shadows and Light" poetry contest.

I didn't notice any spelling mistakes in your "Forever and always, my love" poem.

I thought the relationship and romance / love genres you selected were appropriate for this poem of yours.


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your "Forever and always, my love" poem and I was glad to read it and learn that you and your partner have such a wonderful relationship and strong bond.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, romantic heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










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