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Given: Nov 25, 2024 at 8:33pm
Length: 723 Characters |
692 w/o WritingML
This is a poem about someone being in love with another. However, the other person doesn't see this. One might wonder the why. Could it be an age gap? A culture gap? A social gap? Still in love with a prior love? Or, maybe, they just aren't interested in a new love. Plenty of possibilities exist.
Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.
Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.
Suggestions
Due to the use of harsh language - including two uses of the "f"-word - it would be a good idea to raise this item's rating to 18+, or even GC.
Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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