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 Storms Path Open in new Window. [E]
Poem of path after storm
by Apondia Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings, Apondia!

I'm here for I Write 2025.

This is a great poem, capturing a unique aspect of storms and their aftermath. You bring us through the storm cycle and remind us that all things work out for the best to continue the path of life. The sun rises again, broken branches provide warmth in the winter, and new seedlings replace what was lost.

I especially like the opening lines, bringing us the ominous strum of the deepest guitar string as a comparison to thunder warning of the storm. This was a creative opening metaphor to hook us into the poem.

I noticed you misspelled "scarred" as "scared." Aside from that, I don't see anything to improve upon here. This was an enjoyable read.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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