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 |  | Fair Weather Friends  [E] A poem about fair weather friends  |
| (5.0)   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM"Anniversary Reviews"   My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEMA poem about the toll of fair weathered friends.  WHAT I LIKED I thought the ending was spot on and brought the poem full circle. What's good for the goose is good for the gander.  STRUCTUREThis poem as 3 stanzas with 4 lines and and an AABB CCDD EEFF rythme scheme. MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "But comes the rain, storms or showers, Not one stands with us, in our loneliest hour" I like the metaphor here, as we known rain and showers are a bit of depressing time (just about everyone can relate to a rain storm) and we feel much the same way when our "friends" aren't there for us when we need one. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe opening engages the reader and keeps them reading. The title is an apt description of the poem. The poet uses a good economy of words to communicate complicated feelings. Well done! An Angel Army Review
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