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It's Over! Open in new Window. [ASR]
A 55-Word Story about domestic violence from one familiar with that dance.
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Rwuth, I read this and went WOW! Great minds do think alike. I wrote a few pieces on domestic violence -- "In Less Than an Hour," "Dancing with One Eye Open," and Violent End of a Relationship."

Reading "It's Over," reminded me of the vicious cycle of domestic violence that I witnessed as the CEO of The Family Crisis Center in Prince George's County Maryland.

In few words you told the story of what men and women go through daily -- some all of their lives, and some give their lives. Although it is primarily men abusing women, there are some women who are also abusers. No matter the perpetrator, it is a vicious and deadly cycle.

Thank you for sharing.

Why I read it: I was following up on our phone call and there it was.
What I liked: How you told the complete story in so few words.
What I would change: Nothing
Recommendations: NONE!

Write on WRITE!

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