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For Authors: November 20, 2012 Issue [#5371]

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 This week: Step two in becoming a better writer
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         My last issue I talked about the first step in becoming a better writer - knowing the writing craft including knowing correct grammar, sentence structure, etc. This issue, we go to step 2: Fiction writing needs a plot.

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A Story Requires a Plot


         A story without a plot is like bread without yeast: It is flat, a narrative, a scene, or a descriptive essay - not a story. Therefore to have a story (whether short story or novel), a writer needs to have a plot to make the framework of his/her story.

         So what is a plot? A plot is the causal sequence of events, the why for things that happen. It can be broken down into four components, all which must be included:

                   1. Exposition - info needed to understand a story
                   2. Complication - catalyst that begins major conflict -- MUST have conflict
                   3. Climax - the turning point in story, complication resolved or solvency attempted
                   4. Resolution - events that bring the story to a close (and not just writing "The End")

         Stories in the past had long paragraphs with detailed expository. Those stories told readers what happened. However, today's readers don't accept such writing. Pages of "telling" bore readers. Authors must grab the reader's attention and keep it throughout.

         So how does an author develop a good plot, add leavening for a light, tasty loaf/story? Activity advances and enhances the plot, makes it work. Actions do speak louder than words, and especially in what people read.

         A good writer uses/allows characters to "show" the story. No, that doesn't mean writing in first person, although a writer can. Characters showing the story means to write from the character's or characters' perspective. When writing in third person (the narrator is not a character in the story), an author can change perspective from one character to another from one scene or chapter to another.

         Action, activity, showing from a character's or characters' perspective with all the components required for a plot builds a better story. Plot means a story that isn't flat.

          Character development is directly connected to plot. Character movement and dialogue advance the plot without boring the reader. We will discuss this next time.


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Inspirational as always. Thanks for being here.

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Thanks for the newsletter! Very useful. Looking forward to next. Keep doing good work :)

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Quick-Quill Author IconMail Icon:
You are just what I need! I do not understand Grammar and can't wrap my head around the rules. I will follow your posts and your Picks for clarification! I will have to have an EDITOR when I am ready to present my Nano book after it is done.

blunderbuss
Looking forward to your next one. Have just been involved in a long discussion about punctuation - have you noticed how semi-colons are going (colons are long gone) and many publishers are reducing the options to two - commas and full-stops?

         Just because many publishers don't know what good and correct punctuation does for writing doesn't mean they are correct. In fact, I still want to see colons and semicolons used - correctly.

chied
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ya well i think i'll wait for the update on this on

sorry but it felt kind of dull to read it, this mainly the most obvious thing that doesn't even need to be mentioned (my opinion)

         Interesting. The editorial being slammed was about using correct grammar, spelling, and the foundations of writing. I did not edit the comment or change it in any way. I'm left confused as to what point is being made.


By the time this issue comes out, I will have had surgery on my left shoulder. I'll be one handed for a while, but I plan to have my next issue on time. I'll discuss the use of character development to develop plot and story.

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