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Short Stories: August 21, 2013 Issue [#5848]

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 This week: Under the Microfiction-Scope
  Edited by: Jay's debut novel is out now! Author IconMail Icon
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1. About this Newsletter
2. A Word from our Sponsor
3. Letter from the Editor
4. Editor's Picks
5. A Word from Writing.Com
6. Ask & Answer
7. Removal instructions

About This Newsletter

This Short Stories Newsletter is dedicated to readers and writers of short fiction and to those who want to know more about the art of telling big stories in small spaces.

This month:
Under the Microfiction-Scope
Tiny stories can have a huge impact! Try your hand at microfiction. You may just surprise yourself with the results.


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Letter from the editor

I've been thinking a lot about flash and microfiction lately, learning by the process of rendering a story down to its core components.

One of my favorite micro-story formats is twitter fiction (sometimes twitfic) -- stories in 140 characters or less. Starting with this tiny space, it's a challenge to fit only the most essential details while still being evocative enough to give the reader as complete a picture as possible, while it still implies some kind of change. In Twitter-based fiction, then, since the character limit is 140 firm, it's often helpful to distill a concept down to the specific point of some change in dynamics or some specific imagery which demonstrates the development of what's gone before in the story and what will come after.

A lot of unique and imaginative stuff specifically hinges on reversal of the reader's expectations or showing them a tiny window into a place which is terrifying or mystifying in a small slice. See: my friend Valerie's recent publication in Trapeze -- a picture of a world that's just ever so slightly off, like the picture frame is tilted slightly before we're pulled out of that world forever.

Trapeze Magazine: August 19th, Valerie Valdes.  Open in new Window.

One experiment I did recently during a writing workshop, with author Carrie Cuinn, involved taking a story that I'd started but never finished (which was languishing at around 300 words) and distilling it down into more of a singular moment. It was a concept that interested me: I wanted to write about someone in the situation of being the only survivor of a crash-- on a deserted planet. I wanted this character to be a painter, and I wanted her to express the grief of her hopeless situation through the only language that made sense to her when there was no one left to talk to: her painting.

The problem was, I kept cluttering the thing up with explanations. The whats and wheres and whens and whys were getting in the way of the moment I wanted to express, and stretching the story concept out further than I really wanted to address with this one story. I didn't want to linger on it, but until I was scrambling to come up with something to hand in for class it hadn't occurred to me that the smallest moment of that story was the part that mattered to me, the part I wanted to convey to the reader. It was right then that I got it: for microfiction, you really have to distill a story down to one moment which has a click, a change, an "aha." You have to really fight the impulse to fit in any more story than is necessary to get the gist.

And so this:
Monochrome, 300 words

became this:
Monochrome, 150 words

which became this:
Monochrome, 100 words

I've still got a long ways to go, but I'm liking where I've gotten so far!

Microfiction is a great exercise for writers, but it's also a useful thing for readers and reviewers to practice as well-- namely, the art of reviewing and critiquing microfiction. It's worth mentioning that these types of fiction require a certain mindset to be enjoyable: there's a necessary quality of minimalism, where only the most critical details are filled in by the author. It's the goal for the reader's imagination to do the heavy lifting, and approaching a microfiction story with this mindset means that the reviewer has more to offer than "This piece is really short, so you should definitely consider expanding it!"

When mindfully reviewing microfiction, look for the following features:
* One or more complete images which show some kind of event or dynamic story quality. The shorter the piece is, the more subtle this might be, but in a successful microfiction, the author is using the reader's imagination for leverage-- and it's working.
* In a piece under 300 words, the story should ideally exist in a space where the reader can imagine that something has come before and that something will happen after, even if the story event has a high-octane climactic point in it. The best microfiction, literary or genre, will exist in some world that is believable outside of the context of the story itself.
* Microfiction differs from vignette because it shows the dynamics of a place in time rather than just the place in time itself. It has context, meaning, and has ghosts of all the key components of story wound into it.





northernwrites has another fantastic example of the type of drafting as I did with my story above, so check it out here: one story, four ways:

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by A Guest Visitor


Check out this story and the stories in this issue's Editor's picks for some great examples of flash and microfiction assembled by fellow Writing.Com members!

Until Next Month,
Take care and Write on!
~jay


Editor's Picks

This month's picks!

 Dessert Open in new Window. [E]
2nd place in the Amazing 55 Word Story Contest!
by Mummsy Author Icon

Success Open in new Window. [E]
A 55-word contest entry. Success means different things to some folk.
by JACE Author Icon

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by A Guest Visitor

 Lipstick on a Pig Open in new Window. [13+]
Our leadership at work. Is this the best we can do?
by Hyperiongate Author Icon

 The Trouble with Turtles Open in new Window. [13+]
A concise story for the Amazing 55 Word story contest
by Ben Langhinrichs Author Icon

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by A Guest Visitor

 Jurassic Kid Open in new Window. [E]
My grandson, the four-year-old natural history museum curator.
by Write_Mikey_Write! Author Icon


Here are some places right here on WdC to experiment with microfiction and flash:

Daily Flash Fiction Challenge Open in new Window. [13+]
Enter your story of 300 words or less.
by Arakun the twisted raccoon Author Icon

The Hint Fiction Contest Open in new Window. [ASR]
Can you tell a story with only a few words? Hint Fiction requires a silver pen.
by Storm Machine Author Icon

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by A Guest Visitor

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by A Guest Visitor

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by A Guest Visitor

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The Writer's Cramp Open in new Window. [13+]
Write the best poem or story in 24 hours or less and win 10K GPS!
by Sophurky Author Icon

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The Dialogue 500 Open in new Window. [18+]
Dialogues of 500 words or less.
by W.D.Wilcox Author Icon

 
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Ask & Answer

Responses from "Reverse OutliningOpen in new Window.:
Acme Author Icon writes:
Dear jay,

As ever, when I look for interesting ways to approach writing exercises for my learners, your come up with some smashing ideas. Great read, and fun to practice! Thank you.
Write on!
Acme

Thanks much, Acme! I'm learning as I go, myself, so I figure if I'm learning somethin', it might be useful for others as well.


Responses from "What Are Your Stakes?Open in new Window.:

Quick-Quill Author Icon writes:
This is a good Question! What is at stake for my main Character? What if he loses it or it's threatened? I think it's like chasing a rolling football or super ball. Just when you think you have it, it bounces a different way, just out of your reach. Great NL

Thanks! I admit, I was aiming in a different direction from my typical NL this time, so I was a little nervous about the reception.


Lilithmoon☽ Author Icon writes:
Excellent newsletter. Thanks for the reminder about the importance of what's at stake.


ANN Counselor, Lesbian & Happy Author Icon writes:
You write challenging newsletters; I enjoy them very much. Thanks for giving us the 500 contest site; I will definitely enter even though I've never written 'dialog only' stories.
ann

Thanks, Lilith and Ann! I try to provide a unique perspective where I can. *Smile*

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