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This week: Humor - A Part of Life Edited by: Lornda More Newsletters By This Editor
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Lornda
"If we couldn't laugh we would all go insane." ~ Robert Frost
By drawing on the humor in your life, you can have success in writing comedy.
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The average person laughs about thirteen times in a single day. So how can we use the laughs in our own life and write so it comes across as funny? When writing comedy, a lot of writers are afraid to even try it because they think it’s too hard or humor is not a natural thing to them.
The real life has a vast amount of material for us to write about. You know the saying, “write what you know”, if you laugh thirteen times a day and have in-laws you have a novel right there.
When I joined ten years ago, I was a storyteller, but how did it transfer to the written word? It was horrible. I didn’t give up, though, and it took the right people to send me on the way to writing comedy. The best part is it was people right here at Writing.Com who gave me a few pointers and sacrificed themselves to take the time to read my … stuff.
One member here, Bernie Thomas , had so much patience with me. He gave me advice on how to add humor to one of my stories which was part of a Comedy workshop. And guess what? The story started with a couple of laughs in the real life. I remember it like it was ten years ago. The workshop asked us to choose three funny incidents we had recently. My three picks were my daughter watching the cat dragging his butt across the floor. Taking my mother on an errand that went real bad but funny, and why was I always the one who had to change the empty toilet paper roll. When I asked Bernie to help me to refine the humor in the story, he did it by showing me how to push the real life incidents to the edge for the laugh, and if it wasn’t for him, I probably would not be writing comedy right now. One of the biggest keys to writing humor is to relate to something funny in the real life. There have been many articles here about ‘how’ to write comedy, but Bernie taught me one of the keys on how to get the biggest laugh – exaggerate. I think it’s the number one rule to start writing humor – and of course, write about something that makes you laugh.
This can also be applied when you’re writing about a character. I’ve read many long stories and novels here, and one thing that is sometimes missing is the character quirk of a sense of humor. It’s true, there are serious people in the world, but I think there are many who can make people laugh. Having a comic relief as a secondary character will add another layer to your story and keep them turning the pages. Here again, you can draw on the people you know in the real life, like an uncle who says ‘hello’ three times when he sees you, or even your “interesting” neighbor who talks to himself out loud and you think he’s talking to a 2-year-old but it’s just his cat.
The next time you think you're not funny enough to write humor, ponder on the real life. You’ll be surprised just what little treasures of comedy can end up in your writing. With a bit of practice, you’ll have everyone laughing in the aisles.
Here is the story I wrote for the workshop. Read it at your own risk. Remember, I wrote it a long time ago! It's not in my port anymore but posted in my personal archives. A big thanks to Bernie Thomas for his help. He wrote a lot of comedy at Writing.Com, but now he is a published author of a novel and busy writing the sequels. Check his port for further details.
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"I'll be there in a few minutes," I mumbled to my mother on the phone.
I hung up, and realized I’m standing in my fluffy white housecoat, holding a steaming mug of coffee and a mop of hair that stuck out from here to eternity.
With twenty-three minutes left before I started up the taxi service, I ran to the washroom, only to find the antics of my daughter at work; exactly one and a half sheets of toilet paper were left on the roll. The timing of this ploy amazes me everyday.
We arrived for blood work at the doctor’s office, and the elderly ones crowded the waiting room. They all held on to their little numbered tickets in one hand, and their canes in the other; positioned, and at the ready to sprint like retired thoroughbreds at the starting gate.
As we waited, my mother updated me on her life. As she talked at me, a few of the elderly ones were enthralled with the conversation because some head's were nodding in agreement, and they weren't napping.
“Remember I told you about losing the tip off my cane, and I couldn’t find it anywhere? I went to the shed to put the garbage in, and I was opening the door, and something fell right on my toes. Yep, the rubber tip stuck in the door since Tuesday when I closed it with my cane." Without taking a breath, she shifted gears and said, "I hope it isn’t too much longer, I’ve got to stop at the grocery store before going home.”
I tried to contain myself at this statement. The store? She went yesterday, and the day before that. But, today is Thursday, seniors discount day. Probably, more cat food to feed her three fat cats.
I dropped her off with three bags of groceries, one being full of the teeny tiny cans of cat food, and got home in time for a late lunch. I managed to accomplish some laundry, read the mail, and studied the inside of my eyelids.
That night at dinner, I related my day to my husband.
"So I'm carting her around the grocery store once again for more cat food..."
"I need a new cell phone case," my daughter interrupts. You'd think my husband would have taught her manners.
“The one you want is too expensive. Get one at the dollar store like mine. See,” he said showing his cell phone.
First came the eye-roll, then the sigh, then:
“I don’t want one like yours. It’s elastic... like your pants.”
"Hey, don't talk to your Dad like that..." I said almost choking on the mashed potatoes.
Realizing the truth of her statement, I broke out in laughter.
The day of antics wound down to a screeching end. My daughter relaxed in the living room, reading. I headed to the bedroom, and got ready for bed. Emerging with the fluffy white housecoat on, I sauntered down the hallway to the washroom.
"Mom! Mom! Take a look as this. That’s the longest I’ve seen him do that!”
“Yes, don’t stop him, remember we have new carpet,” I said, as I watched the cat drag his rear end down the hallway.
Closing the washroom door behind me, I turned, and noticed the same scenario that started my day. The vision of an empty toilet paper roll, with shreds of paper hanging from it. Note to self, find out what the daughter does with the vast amount of toilet paper--better yet, train the cat how to use it for his needs!
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I had the opportunity to review three humorous stories for a challenge at the "a very Wodehouse challenge" . If you get the chance, check this fun writing activity out! You have two weeks to finish the tasks.
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Comments from my last newsletter: "Carrie Fisher – One Funny Lady"
Bruce. : "Loved Carrie Fisher as the angry woman in The Blues Brothers."
LJPC - the tortoise : "Carrie Fisher was so smart and talented and had a great sense of humor. I saw her do a show on TV, and she was so funny and open about her life and problems. She died too soon and will be greatly missed."
~ Laura
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GeminiGem🐾 : "I heard Carrie Fisher's interview on NPR, not long before she passed away. She was plugging her memoir The Princess Diarist. She was interesting and funny, and I remember thinking that if I ever have to do an interview, I hope that I could come across like she did. Thanks for the vid of Jimmy Fallon and all doing the Star Wars theme. Priceless. I loved how Chewbacca would appear, looking puzzled at all the crazy humans."
Quick-Quill : "Thank you for this look into Carrie Fisher's life. I had no idea she'd written those screenplays. I'm most appreciative for the link at the end. It had me joining in inspit of myself. That made my day."
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