Some Haiku Poems about Travel/Commuting

Some fun with Haiku about the morning commute, rudeness, traffic. Does it work?

HAIKU Poems
(pains of a modern commuter)

By

Richard Vance


Honking, Honking, loud;
Get the “F” out of my way,
Every day commute!

Driver changes lanes,
No thoughts for anyone else,
Gesture says it all!

My Mercedes Benz
Shows clear I’m better than you
Arrogance out loud!

We all wait in line,
You don’t think you have to wait,
Fly by on the right!

Ah! Too many cars,
Red, blue, silver, black and gold,
An urban rainbow.


Just playing around and having fun with some Haiku - the modern day variety on the commute we all face every day.....some thoughts and emotions/feelings about driving on the highways around Boston, Mass.
What do you think...does it work?

Updated 8-21-07