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Rated: E · Poetry · Personal · #1457598
For the poend poetry contest...
DAD
Dear dad,
I miss you.

Could we share some time?
Sit by the inky blue water,
Discuss what I could tell no other.

“Your presence would enlighten the forebodings of life.”


FORM: Clarity Pyramid

FORMAT STRUCTURE:

1 SYLLABLE
2 syllables
3 syllables

5 syllables
6 syllables
7 syllables

“8 syllables”
[variation: use word count instead of syllable count.]
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