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Looking for Ideas and feed back.

to add more detail to the story, The main character is a female being from another world and that her only source of food is by eating humans,Imagine this as modern day earth.

Also some other Ideas I thought of are that One: she is able to breed with humans to populate the world with these species and Two: The female of the species are kinda of like vampires, To explain every once in a while if she were to eat someone, she becomes pregnant with that person and they are reborn with the ability to eat humans as well. Dont be afraid to be harsh or critical thats why im asking this, if you have any ideas throw them at me please, Thank and I hope you enjoy.



Ever since mankind has looked up at the stars they have asked themselves,Whats out there and are there any other creatures in the universe like us?. Well mankind is going the regret that question. Because there are and they are called Zonians. My name is Sybella and I am a Zonian. Zonians are creatures that look and act like humans except one major difference. We eat humans.

When I arrived at Earth my surrounding was dark with a little light shining from near by lamp posts. The smell was like dust and vegetation for I was in a park. As I noticed all this I began to feel very hungry and a little cold for I had no clothes and there was a slight breeze in the air. I then saw a young woman walking through the park that looked delicious. I then hid myself behind a large oak tree so my prey didnt see me. As she walked by i snuck behind and took her clothes before I ate her. Now when I eat, I eat like a snake. I picked up my victim whose skin felt smooth. As I opened my mouth really wide and put her head in my mouth. I then pushed her in as I swallowed her alive into my stomach. As I ate her , her body felt soft and tasted sweet. When I finished eating her I gave a gentle burp as she kicked and screamed inside my stomach. Before I put her clothes on I admired my round belly that made me appear pregnant due to my full and satisfied stomach. I then pated my round belly as I gave another gentle burp. I heard her kick and scream for thirty minutes before she died in my stomach. After that it took another seven and a half hours for me to fully digest her.

After she was fully digested and I had disposed of her, I was hungry again and went to find someone else to eat. As I did I found a young pregnant woman that looked very delicious. With her pregnant belly she looked very plump and juicy. She then went into a restroom which meant I could now eat her with out anyone seeing, so I followed her. The restroom was clean and smelled like citrus. It was also quiet because we were the only two in there which was perfect. As soon as she came out of the stall I grabbed her and began eating her. I started by swallowing her head first followed by her breasts which felt and tasted soft and juicy. When I got to her belly I had to open my mouth wider for her belly was very big and round. Then I swallow her hips followed by the rest of her body. She tasted kind of like the woman I ate earlier but with a little difference possibly because she was pregnant which made her taste better.