This is a poem I am working on I would like to know what everyone thinks if it flows or perhaps what other wording I should use. I would appreciate any input its for a publication I'm working on.
I see seasons in your eyes
You reflect warmth on occasion,
Your thoughts are a cool breeze of inspiration,
I know that when I fall and cover the ground,
Footsteps of gentle comfort belong to thee.
No matter the changes,
Or whatever the times,
I will always,
See seasons in your eyes!
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