Oh Wow! I wasn't expecting you to put God as our business partner at the end. I was too busy getting mad at the man in the story who kept the 100%.
Great story plot, btw. You certainly zeroed in on the man's ingratitude effectively. I guess, we all experience a bit of that ingratitude at one time or another in our lives. A big Ooops!
I admire you for your honesty and attitude on this subject. It's so true how the victims/survivors have been treated as the one's who have done the wrong and blamed unjustly.
Very few have had compassion towards the woman.
I was 19 , when it was over given the gun that was held on me. The police wanted to charge me for having it. They treated me like dirt and I left before the rape kit came. I went back to work and didn't talk about for decades except to my best friend.
Thanks for understanding...
GOA RADIO ORGANISED
COMPETITION FOR POEMS, IN WHICH
THE FIRST LINE MUST BE ROMANTIC,
BUT THE SECOND LINE SHOULD BE THE OPPOSITE.
This was the winning entry sent by Joao Caitan :
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_My darling, my lover, my beautiful wife,_
_Marrying you messed up my life._
_I see your face when I am dreaming,_
_That's why I always wake up screaming._
_Kind, intelligent, loving and hot;_
_This describes everything you are not._
_I love your smile, your face and your eyes,_
_Damn, I'm good at telling lies!_
_My feelings for you, no words can tell,_
_Except for maybe 'Go to hell.'_
_What inspired this amazing rhyme?_
_A bottle of Feni, little Salt n Lime !_
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