Very well said, Sue. I agree with life is satisfying once we stop focusing on other's happiness and instead of focusing on ourselves. It was a difficult lesson but one that changed my life.
Oh Wow! I wasn't expecting you to put God as our business partner at the end. I was too busy getting mad at the man in the story who kept the 100%.
Great story plot, btw. You certainly zeroed in on the man's ingratitude effectively. I guess, we all experience a bit of that ingratitude at one time or another in our lives. A big Ooops!
'I was sitting on a branch.....
Waiting....
'I felt a tap on my shoulder....
'And there she was.....
beautiful.....
warm and glowing.....
waiting to embrace me.....
'She dried my tears...
in exchange of a story....
'Heard my words with love and patience....
'we held each other tight and cried....
'She offered me her lap so I could rest all my worries...
'Promised me a world full of Wonder and Glories....
'I could feel her warmth slowly turning my body into ashes...
'Opening the cage of pain for my trapped soul..
and then I felt each atom that was me...
Glow and Rise to the skies...
One with the Universe at last...
'Free... so Free...
Finally...'
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